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First haiku

I must confess this:

No haiku have I written 

 Till I wrote this one


May 11, 2009 - Posted by | literature, poetry, Viv's Poetry | , , , , , , ,


  1. I love it Viv! 🙂 There is a first for everything.

    Comment by shelleymhouse | May 13, 2009

  2. I got stuck on Haikus all day after that and wrote about 8 more!

    Comment by viv66 | May 14, 2009

  3. I would like that on a license plate. ^&^

    Comment by sittingpugs | May 16, 2009

  4. ha ha ha.
    you can have it, pugs!!!

    Comment by viv66 | May 16, 2009

  5. The others are over at my other blog,
    I got very into haikus while I was waiting for my students to come back. It’s better than catching limericks though; haikus are elegant!

    Comment by viv66 | May 16, 2009

  6. I think they are elegant as well … 🙂

    Comment by retiredeagle | May 18, 2009

  7. I’m glad you agree!!!

    Comment by viv66 | May 18, 2009

  8. It’s great, but it’s technically not a haiku. The middle line has 8-syllables.

    Comment by Chuck Skoda | June 1, 2009

  9. Thanks for that!
    I have just had a look at my notebook and I transcribed the yet by mistake.
    I have now altered the poem so it does now (as it did when i initially wrote it down) fit the required form.
    That’ll teach me to proof read a bit more clearly!!

    Comment by viv66 | June 2, 2009

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