http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/ Art, Music and Words around The Coffee Table Mon, 07 Dec 2009 22:56:12 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6580 viv66 Tue, 02 Jun 2009 07:24:57 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6580 Thanks for that! I have just had a look at my notebook and I transcribed the yet by mistake. I have now altered the poem so it does now (as it did when i initially wrote it down) fit the required form. That'll teach me to proof read a bit more clearly!! cheers! Thanks for that!
I have just had a look at my notebook and I transcribed the yet by mistake.
I have now altered the poem so it does now (as it did when i initially wrote it down) fit the required form.
That’ll teach me to proof read a bit more clearly!!
cheers!

]]> http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6578 Chuck Skoda Mon, 01 Jun 2009 18:50:33 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6578 It's great, but it's technically not a haiku. The middle line has 8-syllables. It’s great, but it’s technically not a haiku. The middle line has 8-syllables.

]]> http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6543 viv66 Mon, 18 May 2009 08:44:34 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6543 I'm glad you agree!!! I’m glad you agree!!!

]]> http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6542 retiredeagle Mon, 18 May 2009 00:35:17 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6542 I think they are elegant as well ... :-) I think they are elegant as well …

]]> http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6541 viv66 Sat, 16 May 2009 10:35:23 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6541 The others are over at my other blog, http://zenandtheartoftightropewalking.wordpress.com I got very into haikus while I was waiting for my students to come back. It's better than catching limericks though; haikus are elegant! The others are over at my other blog, http://zenandtheartoftightropewalking.wordpress.com
I got very into haikus while I was waiting for my students to come back. It’s better than catching limericks though; haikus are elegant!

]]> http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6540 viv66 Sat, 16 May 2009 10:15:13 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6540 ha ha ha. you can have it, pugs!!! ha ha ha.
you can have it, pugs!!!

]]> http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6539 sittingpugs Sat, 16 May 2009 04:17:22 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6539 I would like that on a license plate. ^&^ I would like that on a license plate. ^&^

]]> http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6537 viv66 Thu, 14 May 2009 06:29:58 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6537 I got stuck on Haikus all day after that and wrote about 8 more! I got stuck on Haikus all day after that and wrote about 8 more!

]]> http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/2009/05/11/first-haiku/#comment-6534 shelleymhouse Wed, 13 May 2009 14:16:16 +0000 http://cafecrem.wordpress.com/?p=3499#comment-6534 I love it Viv! :) There is a first for everything. I love it Viv! There is a first for everything.

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